Marvin,
You could tell that you were passionate about Marvin Gaye’s work in
the 60s and 70s. You clearly showed the relationship between Renaldo “Obie”
Benson and Marvin Gaye to begin the creation of What’s Going On which no one else I saw mention in their blog. I
would suggest maybe explaining a little more about Marvin himself rather than
focusing on all of the people who ended up working on What’s Going On. Overall however, I believe you did a great job
explaining Marvin Gaye’s start in Motown up to the release of What’s Going On. Your blog was extremely
well-written and full of valuable information for someone who is not familiar
with music history or Marvin Gaye. Excellent job!
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